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Old 05-30-2006, 03:53 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Website advice

Hi, I was looking for Little advice on this project Ive been working on tonight, the websites in my signature, check it out! I want to add a lot of useful articles to it for the reader and the search engines, i need a little seo advice for this website, i also want to add marketing tools all-though i'm not talented enough to create my own tools i was think of using iwebs or not.... advice would be appreciated.
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Old 06-14-2006, 06:09 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I dont see the link....
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Old 06-19-2006, 02:14 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Default Re: Website advice

Well, found some grammatical errors you will want to take care of in your first pargraph.

MarketPost.net was designed and published to help Internet marketers receive useful information, and resources throughout their marketing career.

(No comma necessary in that sentence)

Find re printable Internet marketing articles, covering every topic of Internet marketing.

re printable shoud be re-printable

If your looking for a web host provider you came to the right place MarketPost.net has a website hosting review page were Internet marketers can decide which one fits there needs.

Your should be your're. There should be their. Were should be where. This is also a run-on and I think the wording could be changed a little. Here are two a few suggestions for changing this sentence:

Separated with a colon:
If your looking for a web host provider you came to the right place: MarketPost.net has a website hosting review page where Internet marketers can decide which provider fits their needs.

Separated with a period:
If your looking for a web host provider you came to the right place. MarketPost.net has a website hosting review page where Internet marketers can decide which provider fits their needs.

Changed completely:
Are you looking for a web host provider? MarketPost.net has a website hosting review section to help Internet marketers decide which provider best fits their needs.


Remember to bookmark this website it will be updated and changed through out the next years to help you succeed.

Another run-on sentence. Through out should be throughout. I also think "updated and changed" is a bit redundant. Here's a suggestion for changing it:

Remember to bookmark this website as it will be updated regularly with new resources to help you succeed.


Hope this was helpful.

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